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高考满分英语作文(历年高考英语满分作文点评上(附衡水体))
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Yours,
Li Hua
四
试题回顾
第一节 应用文写作
假定你是李华,你校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。请你写信应聘,内容包括:
1. 口语能力:
2. 相关经验;
3. 应聘目的。
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写应聘信。
第一步:根据提示可知,学校英语协会招聘志愿者,接待来访的国外中学生。要求写封应聘信,内容包括:1.口语能力:2.相关经验;3.应聘目的。
第二步:根据写作要求确定关键词(组)。
第三步:根据提示和关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接和过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。
【范文】
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Li Hua. And I am writing to apply for being a volunteer of our school English association.
I have a good command of English and have been to the USA twice. So I can communicate well with native speakers of English. What's more, I am kind and friendly to other people. So I can easily get along with foreign students.
I' m particularly interested in this job because I want to further improve my oral English capabilities and interpersonal communication skills. Hopefully I can receive your acceptance.
Yours faithfully,
Li Hua
试题回顾
第二节 读后续写(满分25分)
阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
It was summer, and my dad wanted to treat me to a vacation like never before. He decided to take me on a trip to the Wild West.
We took a plane to Albuquerque, a big city in the state of New Mexico. We reached Albuquerque in the late afermoon. Uncle Paul, my dad's friend, picked us up from the airport and drove me up to his farm in Pecos.
His wife Tina cooked us a delicious dinner and we got to know his sons Ryan and Kyle. My dad and I spent the night in the guestroom of the farm house listening to the frogs and water rolling down the river nearby. Very early in the morning, Uncle Paul woke us up to have breakfast. "The day starts at dawn on my farm," he said. After breakfast, I went to help Aunt Tina feed the chickens, while my dad went with Uncle Paul to take the sheep out to graze (吃草). I was impressed to see my dad and Uncle Paul riding horses. They looked really cool.
In the afternoon, I asked Uncle Paul if I could take a horse ride, and he said yes, as long as my dad went with me. I wasn't going to take a horse ride by myself anyway. So, my dad and I put on our new cowboy hats, got on our horses, and headed slowly towards the mountains. “Don't be late for supper," Uncle Paul cried, "and keep to the track so that you don't get lost!" “OK!" my dad cried back. After a while Uncle Paul and his farm house were out of sight. It was so peaceful and quiet and the colors of the brown rocks, the deep green pine trees, and the late aftermoon sunmixed to create a magic scene. It looked like a beautiful woven ( 编织的) blanket spread out upon the ground just for us.
注意:
1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
【思路点拨】
读后续写要求考生首先要读懂已有信息,不仅能读懂字面含义,还要理清文章的脉络。续篇这篇短文时,考生要搞清楚故事的发展进程、前因后果、地理位置、人物思想情感的变化等。在此基础上,考生要顺着文章的思路,根据线索,发挥想象,对其后的情节进行合理预测,并用语言表达出来。
通过阅读所给文章可知,父亲带儿子去西部荒野的一个朋友家体验农场生活,见父亲和叔叔骑马,儿子也很想骑,于是亲身上马体验。
根据第一段所给首句Suddenly a little rabbit jumped out in front of my horse.这一句是故事发展的转折点,可从rabbit出现后带来的反应扩展开,可以写马的反应,也可以写人的反应,但要注意与第二段首句相呼应。第二段首句是We had no idea where we were and it was getting dark.这一句呼应前文Uncle Paul的叮嘱——不要误吃晚饭,可从如何寻路返回农场去写。
续写时注意要使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语,我们要熟悉所给划线词语,恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右;续写完成后要用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
【满分范文】
Suddenly a lttle rabbit jumped out in front of my horse. My horse turned to the 1eft to avoid the ittle rabbit as I held on tightly and tried not to fall. Then my dad turned around and shouted, Hoid on! All of a sudden the horse began to run My dad tried to keep up behind us. For a few minutes my horse slowed down to a trot and then stopped beside a river. I looked around and realized that we were way off the track.
We had no idea where we were and it got dark. Luckily the stars came out and gave us a little light when we were looking for the way to the farm house. After what must have been several hours, we suddenly heard the sound of sheep in the distance. My dad and I both rode our horses towards the sound of the sheep. As we got closer we saw Uncle Paul with a flashlight waving us over. What a night!
衡水体
"衡水体”实质上是衡水中学学生书写的手写印刷体, 随着中考高考电子阅卷的普及,采用简洁、工整、快速的字体进行书写成为必需,极大地迎合了阅卷老师心理和电脑显示特点。一定程度上有助于大家在书写上占先。下面来看看衡水体的特点:
总的来说,“衡水体”英文的特点是圆润,饱满,字母的高度,大小,间距,单词间距都精雕细琢。效果整齐统一,没有连笔。
1、直线和弧线是写好衡水体的基础
2、清晰而简捷的笔画,无勾挑,不连带,是写好中高考试卷的首选
3、与英文手写印刷体比较:t增加了附钩,l增加一小钩以免于与大写的I混淆,y变直线为弧线。
4、与意大利斜体比较:没过多缠绕笔法,使笔画显得更简单。
5、与花体比较:衡水体字字独立,无连带运笔,避免了笔画的混化,便于电脑识别,难怪广受学生喜爱。
这些特点,使得“衡水体”英文作文试卷在扫描到电脑之后,比其他字体更加清晰。
那么,字母规范化书写训练是写好英文的基本功。
附1:衡水体26个英文字母怎么写
一、写出衡水体的英语字母需要准备的工具
直尺,铅笔,橡皮,0.9mm中性碳素笔,任意横格纸或考试答题卡
二、衡水体26个英文字母具体操作步骤
第一步:拿出准备好的直尺,在横线上4或5mm处使用铅笔画出一条直线,然后重复操作至最后一行。
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