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前赴后继造句(2020年中考英语作文新冠相关热门话题汇编和高分指导)
词数,时态,句型前赴后继造句(2020年中考英语作文新冠相关热门话题汇编和高分指导)
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2.范文点评:本文作者按要求完成题目要求,包括了所有要点提示,时态和格式正确,没有语法和单词拼写错误,表达条理通顺,使用一些高级句型,是一篇优秀的范文。
3.高分亮点:
连词和短语:
hold a party;perform a show;give performance;such as;give some good advice;invite sb. to do sth;have a good time等。
高分句型:
(1)I’m glad to tell you that our class will hold a party at 18:30 on June 25th.
(2) I hope you can give some good advice for the party and invite you to perform a show for everyone.
(3)I think this kind of party will enhance the friendship between the teachers and the students.等。
襄阳阳光学校 07
自律,即自我约束,是自我提升的一种途径,有助于我们成长,促使我们不断前行。
针对目前人们都抗战疫情,不得不隔离在家,那么无论是在家自学还是采取网上授课,自律就自然成为了决定学生们在家学习效率的决定性因素。请用英语写一篇以“自律”为主题的短文,谈谈为了增强自律意识,你做过什么,以及这样做给你带来的好处。词数90词左右。
提示词语: self-disciplined(自律的), plan, goal, habit, improve
提示问题: What did you do to be self-disciplined?
What benefits have you got from doing so?
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life _______________
范文
Self-discipline
Self-discipline plays an important role in our life. To be honest, I am a person who is self-disciplined. I used to follow all kinds of rules and hand in the tasks appointed on time at school. And I could not only respect all my teachers but also get on well with my classmates. At home, I was able to balance housework and homework. I usually made a plan in advance to make it easier to achieve my goal. After finishing all the tasks, I developed the habit of going to bed early. In the society, I spared no effort to improve myself all the time.
In a word, I have benefited a lot from being self-disciplined. First of all, I have had many good habits, which make my life easier and more regular. Secondly, my life and my study have been high efficiency so that a lot of time has been saved. Thirdly, being self-disciplined is good for me to have a better and brighter future. In the future, I will continue to be a self-disciplined person.
【解析】
1.题干解读:该题目属于记叙文写作,写作时要按记叙文格式写。在写作时开头介绍自律的重要性以及我如何做到自律的人;第二段介绍我可以从自律中获得的好处。
2.范文点评:范文采用两段式;用第一人称来叙述内容;时态采用一般过去时和现在完成时,用一般过去时介绍我如何自律的,叙述完整且条理清晰。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。
3.高分亮点:
短语:
play an important role in;to be honest;all kinds of;on time;get on well on with;in advance;spare no effort to do sth;in a word;first of all;continue to do sth
句型:
定语从句which make my life easier and more regular
目的状语从句so that a lot of time has been saved
孝感市 07
感恩是永恒的主题,孝敬父母是中华民族的传统美德,父母给予我们生命,抚养我们长大。请以“Be Thankful to Our Parents”为题写一篇短文。内容包括:
1. 父母为我们做了什么?
2. 我们应该怎样感恩父母?
3.帮助父母做家务,陪他们聊天,多陪伴他们,关心他们的身体等等话题来入手。
要求:
1.100词左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及校名。Be Thankful to Our Parents
__________________
范文
Be Thankful to Our Parents
Our parents love us more than anybody else in the world. They try to take good care of us in our daily life and help us with our lessons. They communicate with us and cheer us up when we are upset. They encourage us when we fail in the exam. When we meet difficulties, they are the first to come up and stand with us to solve the problems.
Thanks to them, we grow up healthily and happily. Learning to care for our parents is what we should do. First, we can help do more housework. Second, we should respect them and get on well with them. Then they may feel happy. Third, we are supposed to study hard and try not to make them worry about us.
All in all, we should always be grateful to our parents and do what we can to thank them.
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇话题作文,要求以“感恩父母”为题写一篇文章,内容需包括父母为我们做的事以及我们应该为父母做的事。根据题目要求可知,本文以第一和第三人称为主,时态为一般现在时。
2.范文点评:文章分为三部分,第一段介绍父母为我们做的事;第二段介绍我们应该为父母做的事,包括做家务、努力学习等;第三段总结全文,升华主旨。短文使用了正确的时态和人称,符合表达的需要。文章语法规范,句式完整,叙述清晰有条理。
3.高分亮点:
短语:
take good care of;help sb with sth;cheer up;grow up;get on well with;be supposed to;all in all。
句型:
They communicate with us and cheer us up when we are upset.(when引导的时间状语从句)
Learning to care for our parents is what we should do.(what引导的表语从句)
最新信息卷 08
2020年的春节,许多人选择待在家里,这和过去喜庆热闹的春节不一样,你一定也有不同的经历和新年愿望。请根据以下要求和要点用英语写一篇短文。
提示:
1. 参考提示语,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
4. 词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数。 The Spring Festival in 2020
To stop the spread of COVID-19, __________
Possible version One;
To stop the spread of COVID-19, most of us Chinese spent our Spring Festival at home. All of us had an unusual holiday.
In the past, I often visited relatives and friends or went travelling during the festival. This year, I spent more time with my family and I felt we got much closer. I also spent some time surfing the Internet because I wanted to know how COVID-19 was going and how we should protect ourselves. At the same time, I was deeply moved by those brave doctors and kind people.
My wish for the new year is that the outbreak will be over soon and all of us can go back to our normal lives
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